Raise the Flag 2025 Fiction Bonus Comp 1

Competition ID #: 8027
Status: Finished
Submitted by: FA Phoenix Berkana
Competition dates: 2025-09-01 - 2025-09-14
Subgroup: TIE Corps
Units involved: All
Description:

Prompt

This year features THREE potential prompts which are outlined here!

Submissions

  • The three judges will be the members of the TIE Corps Command Staff (TCCOM, SOO, WO)
  • Fiction will be limited to one submission per pilot
  • Word count minimum (1000) and maximum (4000) will be implemented.
  • No AI derived fiction writing (don't use AI to write a story for you even if you intend to tweak it afterwards).
  • Submit your submission to the Warfare Officer at phoenixberkana@gmail.com

Scoring Rubric

Idea

  • 4 points: Includes a clearly presented central idea with relevent facts, supporting details or explanations. Contains all relevant information included in the prompt.
  • 3 points: Includes a central idea with mostly relevant facts, supporting details, or explanations. Contains most of the relevant information included in the prompt.
  • 2 points: Includes a central idea with limited factions, supporting details, and/or explanation. Contains some of the relevant information included in the prompt.
  • 1 points: Includes a central idea but lacks related facts, supporting details, and/or explanation. Contains none of the relevant information included in the prompt.

Content

  • 4 points: Uses vivid descriptive language and concrete sensory details. Enables the reader to visualize the events or experiences.
  • 3 points: Uses descriptive language and concrete sensory details. Enables the reader to visualize the events of experiences.
  • 2 points: Uses limited, repetitive language with little sensory details. Does not give a visual picture.
  • 1 point: Uses dull, repetitive words and no details. Word choice confuses the reader.

Characters

  • 4 points: Reader is able to fully conceptualize the characters, their motivations, and intentions.
  • 3 points: Reader is able to understand the characters, their motivations, and intentions.
  • 2 points: Reader has limited understanding of and cannot connect with the characters.
  • 1 point: Reader is left with no understanding about the characters in the story.

Dialog

  • 4 points: Voice chosen is appropriate to topic, purpose, and audience. Writing is expressive, engaging and/or sincere.
  • 3 points: Voice is present, shows awareness of audience. Writing is somewhat engaging and expressive.
  • 2 points: Voice is inconsistent or weak. Shows limited awareness of audience.
  • 1 point: Little or no voice is evident. Awareness of audience or personal involvement is not evident.

Conventions

  • 4 points: Contains few if any errors in conventions that makes the writing easy to read and understand.
  • 3 points: Contains some convention errors that do not interfere with the understanding of the story.
  • 2 points: Contains frequent convention errors that are noticeable and confuse the reader
  • 1 point: Contains so many convention errors that the writing is difficult to follow.
Competition awards:
  • Fiction bonus comps (each), Iron Stars with Ribbons: Gold, Silver x2, Bronze x3, Copper x4 (top ten)
  • Individual best fiction piece between both bonus comps: Upgraded to IS-PR

Competition runtime starts on the first day at 00:00:01 UTC, and ends on the last day at 23:59:59 UTC.

Competition Awards Presented
Award Recipient Reason Date
IS-PR MAJ Isabis Kamaria For placing 1st in Raise the Flag 2025 - Fiction Bonus Competition One. Well done! (upgraded as the best piece overall) 2025-10-16
IS-SR GN Stryker For placing 2nd in Raise the Flag 2025 - Fiction Bonus Competition One. Well done! 2025-10-16
IS-SR GN Alexandre Morgan For placing 3rd in Raise the Flag 2025 - Fiction Bonus Competition One. Well done! 2025-10-16
IS-BR AD Locke Setzer For placing 4th in Raise the Flag 2025 - Fiction Bonus Competition One. Well done! 2025-10-16
IS-BR COL Marenta Jean For placing 5th in Raise the Flag 2025 - Fiction Bonus Competition One. Well done! 2025-10-16
IS-BR LCM Reece Torenn For placing 6th in Raise the Flag 2025 - Fiction Bonus Competition One. Well done! 2025-10-16
IS-CR CPT JKast For placing 7th in Raise the Flag 2025 - Fiction Bonus Competition One. Well done! 2025-10-16
IS-CR CPT Gian Webb For placing 8th in Raise the Flag 2025 - Fiction Bonus Competition One. Well done! 2025-10-16
IS-CR CPT Hector Von Ricmore For placing 9th in Raise the Flag 2025 - Fiction Bonus Competition One. Well done! 2025-10-16
IS-CR MAJ Jai Thorne For placing 10th in Raise the Flag 2025 - Fiction Bonus Competition One. Well done! 2025-10-16